Tiong Ann’s one..

June 12, 2008

The 5 liner

Filed under: 1 — gta189 @ 4:35 pm

I am in a rush now as I am leaving for beijing on the 17th to the 23rd. So I am supposed to finish all of my homework now. Here I squeeze 15 words in this short paragraph.

The jubilant bedlam caused by the charlatan galvanized the whole casino and split it into two halves, the adherents of the winner and the loser. Inebriated losers, completely disgruntled, started a huge fracas as everyone threw away all decorum. A young boy, porfession being a fledgling pickpocket, kept his equanimity and exploited the situation. His avarice drove him to everyone in the fight until an obese man grabbed his hand, full of pique, and shouted

“What are you doing to my wallet?”

And then the fight suddenly stopped.

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7 Comments »

  1. I do love you usual entries. How relevant* they are to us as students.
    *[Not really sure how to put it in words.]

    Comment by Alfie — June 22, 2008 @ 2:29 pm

  2. Very entertaining!

    Comment by PCW — June 25, 2008 @ 12:35 pm

  3. I’m impressed you managed to squeeze that much in one entry. Your posts are really interesting to read.

    Comment by Darren — June 25, 2008 @ 12:41 pm

  4. Ur blog is the best, the stories r so entertaining!

    Comment by Darren Yap — June 25, 2008 @ 12:59 pm

  5. GOH TIONG ANN!
    you did your work. good job. keep it up.

    Comment by jiaxin,adeline,shiyun,jilyn — June 25, 2008 @ 1:00 pm

  6. o0 this is very cool same old typical tion ant

    cool essays best i seen

    Comment by pin jun, fong sin — June 25, 2008 @ 1:03 pm

  7. o.O unusual ending to your posts but anyway keep the good work up XD

    Comment by Dylan~ — June 30, 2008 @ 8:03 pm


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